Comments on One Small Story in Seven ActsTypePad2012-02-10T06:46:58ZRavenshttps://www.ravensview.ca/tag:typepad.com,2003:https://www.ravensview.ca/2012/02/one-small-story-in-seven-acts/comments/atom.xml/Ravens commented on 'One Small Story in Seven Acts'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e20167621aa955970b2012-02-10T17:35:12Z2012-02-13T17:58:59ZRavenshttp://profile.typepad.com/ravensThx - all good comments. I liked the Siri character, may expand on it. And I re-read it and agree...<p>Thx - all good comments. I liked the Siri character, may expand on it. And I re-read it and agree that the act labels could get in the way - I'll re-arrange. Thx all</p>Eden Mabee commented on 'One Small Story in Seven Acts'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e2016301253120970d2012-02-10T17:09:57Z2019-01-31T09:51:02ZEden Mabeehttp://profile.typepad.com/edenmabeeCute little piece. Not sure I liked the use of the "act" labels snce they drew me out of the...<p>Cute little piece. Not sure I liked the use of the "act" labels snce they drew me out of the story and into "Writing Theory" mode, but otherwise.. good! </p>Ninjagal commented on 'One Small Story in Seven Acts'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e2016762165f55970b2012-02-10T10:58:05Z2012-02-10T15:18:52ZNinjagalhttp://profile.typepad.com/ninjagalWow, I wasn't expecting this. Great story :)<p>Wow, I wasn't expecting this. Great story :) </p>Shan Burton commented on 'One Small Story in Seven Acts'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e20168e716fd7c970c2012-02-10T09:30:51Z2012-02-10T10:43:38ZShan Burtonhttp://profile.typepad.com/shanburtonMike - I don't know what I was expecting, but I know it was not that witty little flight of...<p>Mike - I don't know what I was expecting, but I know it was not that witty little flight of fancy!</p>
<p>Jim and I would love to invite Siri home with us. Our kids are not grown, though, and our one income affords us pay as we go luxury.</p>
<p>You brought me Siri for free!</p>
<p>And, tomorrow, I plan to make good use of that plan, too!</p>