Comments on Nosy, Nosy, Nosy TypePad2012-08-09T00:38:08ZRavenshttps://www.ravensview.ca/tag:typepad.com,2003:https://www.ravensview.ca/2012/08/nosy-nosy-nosy-/comments/atom.xml/dex commented on 'Nosy, Nosy, Nosy 'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e20167693fe959970b2012-08-13T14:54:44Z2012-08-13T21:25:21Zdexhttp://ravenspeak.wordpress.comWell done. I really enjoyed it.<p>Well done. I really enjoyed it.</p>Joyce Juzwik commented on 'Nosy, Nosy, Nosy 'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e20176172bb10d970c2012-08-11T21:58:05Z2012-08-12T03:39:32ZJoyce Juzwikhttp://jfjuzwik.blogspot.comOh how slick this is. You really had me going, right up until the very end. Quite the whammy there,...<p>Oh how slick this is. You really had me going, right up until the very end. Quite the whammy there, and in a good way too. I love the pacing, you almost can't catch your breath all the while, just knowing Gladys is going to push him too far and then...</p>
<p>This is great fun. I feel sorry for the guy though. What lengths he had to go to trying to avoid more pies!</p>Ravens commented on 'Nosy, Nosy, Nosy 'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e2016769311920970b2012-08-10T20:21:19Z2012-08-10T21:45:29ZRavenshttp://profile.typepad.com/ravensThanks to all for the comments. I do mean for the audience to think at first maybe he's a serial...<p>Thanks to all for the comments. I do mean for the audience to think at first maybe he's a serial killer, and maybe he'll have to do Gladys in. And if she never returns form the holiday - Abner will not be that upset. At the end I did want the secret he's hiding to be only that that he's not a vegetarian.<br />
Maybe sentence "I'd done it before, for other things I didn't want found" needs to come out to tone our suspicions down a bit.</p>Beach Bum commented on 'Nosy, Nosy, Nosy 'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e2017617259af3970c2012-08-10T18:23:43Z2012-08-10T20:12:28ZBeach Bumhttp://carolinaparrothead.blogspot.comI agree with CM, Gladys is just faking so she can try and get away. Well done!<p>I agree with CM, Gladys is just faking so she can try and get away. Well done! </p>Glenn Ricafrente commented on 'Nosy, Nosy, Nosy 'tag:typepad.com,2003:6a00d83455a07e69e20167692e09fa970b2012-08-10T07:32:26Z2012-08-10T20:12:28ZGlenn Ricafrentehttp://www.glenn-ricafrente.blogspot.com/Nice story. I generally don't like misdirects, but you played fair: the text itself gave the opening for the twist...<p>Nice story. I generally don't like misdirects, but you played fair: the text itself gave the opening for the twist ending (not a serial killer after all, but just someone who was just embarrassed about getting caught in a little white lie -- about being a vegetarian).</p>